Analysis of The Man Inside My Head



The man inside my head keeps telling me
Some things are not the way they ought to be.
He says I should be happy with my life,
Instead of courting misery and strife.

I say to him, that's just the way things are;
That happiness is not kept in a jar.
He tells me that I worry far too much
About missed opportunities, and such.

I really wish, deep down, that I could be
As nonchalant and self-possessed as he.
Big niggles nag and gnaw inside my mind;
I guess I've always been the anxious kind.

The man inside my head has no such woes;
The answer to all things he thinks he knows!
If only life were simple, like he says,
I'd have mine figured out in two short days!

Copyright © Robert Haigh 2018


Scheme AABB CCDD AAEE FFXX X
Poetic Form
Metre 0101111101 1111011111 1111110111 0111010001 1111110111 1100111001 1111110111 011010001 1101111111 101010111 111010111 111110101 0101111111 0101111111 1101010111 1111010111 10101
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 690
Words 137
Sentences 9
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 1
Lines Amount 17
Letters per line (avg) 31
Words per line (avg) 8
Letters per stanza (avg) 106
Words per stanza (avg) 27
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Submitted by RobertHaigh on July 29, 2020

Modified on April 02, 2023

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Robert Haigh

Robert Haigh is an amateur English poet, Musician and photographer. more…

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