Analysis of Clouds

Suleiman al-fulayyih 1950 (Hammad desert)



What pain
When the heart darkens gloomily
Thick clouds
come crowding my mind, densely
densely,
gradually.
What sadness when thunder shakes
the mountains of anguish in my heart
violently
violently it comes.
It destroys me,
this lightning
that gleams in the desert of my
soul
but illuminates nothing!


Scheme ABCBBBDEBFBGHIG
Poetic Form Tetractys  (27%)
Metre 11 1011100 11 1101110 10 1000 1101101 010110011 1000 100011 1011 110 11001011 1 101010
Closest metre Iambic dimeter
Characters 284
Words 48
Sentences 3
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 15
Lines Amount 15
Letters per line (avg) 16
Words per line (avg) 3
Letters per stanza (avg) 245
Words per stanza (avg) 48
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Submitted on January 29, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Suleiman al-fulayyih

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