Analysis of Someday the Stars



It’s dark where I live, and it’s very cold too.

Here the seas are green, the grass is blue,

And silence is the loudest noise you can make.

And not a single soul can whisper

Nor could a heart so much as prosper

Thus, it’s just the lonely roads I take.

I am naught but a ghost of something I was,

I am naught but the echo of screams.

I am but a prisoner to my own words,

I am naught but a shatter of dreams

So, it’s through the lonely roads I walk.

Somedays the stars shine with warmth and light,

When I’m all alone and cold at night

Somedays the stars sing my praise

But most days they’re a distant haze

So I fly through the lonely skies, like a hawk.

For surely I don’t need the light,

If all I could want is there at night

Surely I don’t need

Lullabies to sing me to sleep

For the silence, it reaches so deep

Enough for me to breathe

As it cuts through me and leaves me to bleed.

I need only the lonely, incessant rains

I’m fighting a devil who takes on many forms.

The devil is me –

But I refuse to have another soul perish in my storms

I’m caught up in my own hurricanes

And so, I choose to sail through the lonely seas

Amidst the chilling and salty breeze

Here I will die and here I will wake.

Where the waves are a tall and menacing being

With a mind of its own, it stops me from fleeing

How cruel is it that I’ve naught but the lonely paths to take?


Scheme A A B C C B X D X D E F F G G E F F H I I X H J K X K J L L B M M B
Poetic Form
Metre 11111011011 101110111 01010101111 010101110 110111110 111010111 11110111011 111101011 11101001111 111101011 111010111 10111101 111010111 101111 11110101 11110101101 11011101 111111111 10111 1011111 101011011 011111 1111101111 11100100101 110010111101 01011 110111010110011 11101110 01111110101 010100101 111101111 101101010010 101111111110 110111111010111
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 1,361
Words 280
Sentences 10
Stanzas 34
Stanza Lengths 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1
Lines Amount 34
Letters per line (avg) 31
Words per line (avg) 8
Letters per stanza (avg) 31
Words per stanza (avg) 8
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Submitted on February 01, 2021

Modified on March 28, 2023

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