Analysis of Unwanted and Unloved



Good morning mommy;
I'm hungry mommy, please feed me;
Oops I'm sorry mommy, I didn't mean to tug that;
Next time I won't, so you don't get sick again.
Look mommy I'm growing;
I heard you say you was fat, I'm sorry;
Mommy who's that guy I hear;
Is that my daddy?
Wow mommy your loud today;
Are you mad or upset;
That man said some mean stuff;
Dont cry mommy, here's a hug;
Oops sorry mommy, I made you sick again.
Good morning mommy;
I heard you say you was going to the doctor;
Maybe you can see me waving to you;
You can see how much I've grown.
Mommy, somethings wrong;
I feel weird and sleepy;
Mommy, it's dark.
I died today mommy;
What did I do wrong to make you hate me;
Was I ugly when you saw me;
Was I not good enough for you?
I heard you say before I left;
That you didn't want me;
To remove me and remove me now.
I died today mommy;
Just because you didn't want me;
But guess what mommy;
I still love you so much;
I will waiting for you;
Bye for now mommy.


Scheme AabcdaeafghicAjklmanAaakoapAaaqka
Poetic Form
Metre 11010 11010111 1110101101111 11111111101 110110 1111111110 1011111 11110 1101101 111101 111111 1110101 11010111101 11010 111111101010 1011111011 1111111 1011 111010 1011 110110 1111111111 11101111 11110111 11110111 111011 101100111 110110 10111011 11110 111111 111011 11110
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 934
Words 197
Sentences 8
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 33
Lines Amount 33
Letters per line (avg) 22
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 716
Words per stanza (avg) 197
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Submitted by TerriLynn on February 22, 2021

Modified on April 16, 2023

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