Analysis of 4:37 In The Morning



seven days
thats how long it took me
to fall in love with you
i dont really know you
and you dont really know me
but how could we?
we've only spoken for seven days
i can easily find more than
eleven trillion ways of telling you
why the mets are better than
the yankees in every way
but i cant even find a single way
of telling you how much
you cortelyou
made me feel
these past seven days
haha you've got be kidding right?
i tell myself, online dating?
yeah right, that doesnt work
its just a breeding ground for
stuck up b*tch*s and stupid jerks
i have tried to ignore you
but every time i try
i cant help but adore you
i'm not even going to lie
i cant sleep right now
it's 4:37 in the morning
almost bright outside
and i cant stop thinking of you
you're quite a lady
and i'm glad i met you, online of all places
however strange it may be
but i hear fate works in mysterious ways
and i'm grateful to have been
in the presense of heaven's grace


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Poetic Form Tetractys  (20%)
Metre 101 111111 110111 111011 0111011 1111 110101101 11100111 0101011101 1011101 01001001 1111010101 110111 110 111 11101 1111101 111110 11111 1101011 111110101 1111011 1100111 1111011 11101011 11111 10010 1111 01111011 11010 01111111110 101111 11111001001 0110111 0011101
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 910
Words 191
Sentences 4
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 35
Lines Amount 35
Letters per line (avg) 21
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 738
Words per stanza (avg) 190
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Submitted on December 04, 2015

Modified on March 05, 2023

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