Analysis of Alive She Cried



alive she cried deep in the night
feeling the pangs of pleasure betwix her
thigs!alive she cried riding white lights
the candle dies,melting its pride
shooting the seamen of the sun deep,deep in
the depthless,love-lipped infinite blackhole of the sky
alive she cried deep in the night, feelings
the pangs of pleasure in her thigs
sheindoor on her parting witness and cry as
I part her pleasure with my ply!
love divides, love multiply;
beads of happiness meek, solemn, timed
Hang off alaknanda's deep, black, beauteous eyes -
alive she cried she`s the web;
I`m the spider I`m the stars; She's the sky
She's the colors; I`m the clime
Glued like crazy glue-all knotted, timed
move as a single beacon against the sky


Scheme ABCDEFGCHFFIJKFLIF
Poetic Form
Metre 01111001 100111010 1111011 010111 1001010110 0111001101 0111100110 01110001 1101010011 11010111 101110 111001101 1111111 0111101 1010101101 1010101 111011101 11010100101
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 696
Words 127
Sentences 3
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 18
Lines Amount 18
Letters per line (avg) 32
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 569
Words per stanza (avg) 123
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Submitted on June 12, 2010

Modified on April 17, 2023

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