Analysis of Ambiliyammavan



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                        Our Uncle Moon!
                        (Brother of Mother Earth);
                        How sweet the concept!
                        My haunting reminiscence!
                        (To day my birthday,
                        Lakshmi has sent the card.)

We are inDarwinthis time;
                        To celebrate my 68th B'Day;
                        O I'm getting older;
                        But our Uncle Moon debonair;
                        (My mother too never gets old!)
                        My mind too is budding!

Here atDarwin, I feared,
                        My uncle might not recognize;
                        This foreign nephew;
                        But, o my loving uncle,
                        You are speaking Malayalam!

You bestow the cool caressing;
                        The patting affection on me;
                        I feel, you too accompanied us;
                        From Keralam toNorth Australia!
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Scheme X XXXXAX BAXXXC XXXXB CXXX
Poetic Form
Metre 11 1 10101 101101 11010 110010 1111 11101 1111 11011111 111010 11010101 11011011 111110 1111 1101110 11010 1111010 11101 10101010 01001011 111101001 111010 1
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 1,147
Words 98
Sentences 9
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 8, 6, 5, 5
Lines Amount 24
Letters per line (avg) 19
Words per line (avg) 4
Letters per stanza (avg) 112
Words per stanza (avg) 24
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Submitted on January 25, 2013

Modified on March 05, 2023

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drkgbalakrishnan kandangath

24-6-1944/DOB bsc, mbbs. fica Kandangath,Kattoor-680702-Thrissur India-680702 more…

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