Analysis of An Old Friend



“Let me tell you a story” ~
the oldest of all good lines.
It begins with you
and ends with me,
as many good stories do.
I can already see you smiling.

Yes, when you were born
you were so small,
as most newborns are.
Time passed and you grew
into the tallest amongst us.
You whispered words of kindness
and sheltered all in need.

In springtime, your bounty
delighted us,
and in summer, it grew,
until, in autumn, you gave it to me.
In the sweetness of preserves,
your generosity will be
remembered throughout
the long winter.

Your arms reach up to the sky,
while your feet are firmly
bound by the warm earth.
Your body is now wizened,
yet still strong and full of life.
For many years to come we will
keep each other company,
and I will read stories
beneath your friendly boughs.


Scheme AXBABX XXXBCCX ACBAXAXX XAXXXXAXX
Poetic Form Etheree  (27%)
Tetractys  (23%)
Metre 1111010 0101111 10111 0111 1101101 110101110 11101 1011 1111 11011 01010011 1101110 010101 01110 0101 001011 0101011111 0010101 1010011 01001 0110 1111101 111110 11011 1101110 1110111 11011111 1110100 011110 011101
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 753
Words 147
Sentences 11
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 6, 7, 8, 9
Lines Amount 30
Letters per line (avg) 20
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 151
Words per stanza (avg) 37
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Submitted on May 02, 2011

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Inge Meldgaard

Born in Denmark in 1953, I migrated to Australia with my family in 1957. After spending my school years in Yallourn, I moved to Melbourne in 1970 to attend Monash University. Having graduated with a science degree in 1975, I worked in various fields, such as youth work, teaching, politics (with a special interest in the natural environment), social research, community development, and finally, information technology. I have also completed two graduate diplomas: one in sociology and the other in information technology, both at Swinburne University. Now retired, my last position was as an IT Manager at Monash University. Gardening, art, poetry and writing have also been life-long interests.I have recently published my first book, 'The Cicada', which is a crime/mystery novel, set in Australia, four hundred years into the future.Website: ingemeldgaard.daportfolio.com more…

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