Analysis of Before Me



To see you leave once again
is it over?
Watching you descend down the stairs
it kills me!
I can't think striaght
pain burning inside of me
Shutting me out
because your hurting
Closing me out
are you trying to forget
the pain before me...

I hear you saying
it's the last time for me
it's over!
But I'm watching you ascend
come back before me...
takind me down
further inside your misery!


Scheme XAXBCBCDCCB DBACBXB
Poetic Form
Metre 1111101 1110 10101101 111 1111 1100111 1011 01110 1011 1110101 01011 11110 101111 110 1110101 11011 111 10011100
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 369
Words 73
Sentences 6
Stanzas 2
Stanza Lengths 11, 7
Lines Amount 18
Letters per line (avg) 17
Words per line (avg) 4
Letters per stanza (avg) 150
Words per stanza (avg) 37
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Submitted on March 24, 2013

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Eric Upchurch

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