Analysis of Between You and Me
To the wind I have entrusted
my uprising desire of you
that stays inside me
to let it blow smoothly your way.
To the sun I have deputized
my blazing desire of you
that is like a flame burning greedily
a bunch of dry twigs to brighten your day.
To my visualization I have flung
my million of deep feelings of you
to be engraved in clouds hanging in the sky
in a string of meaningfully worded beads for you to know.
To your dreams I have sent
my relentless, romantic sweet talk
to make our love thread in our hearts
that you knit become real.
| Scheme | XABC XABC XAXX XXXX |
|---|---|
| Poetic Form | |
| Metre | 10111010 101001011 11011 11111011 1011110 11001011 1110110100 0111111011 110010111 110111011 11010110001 001110001011111 111111 101001011 1110110101 111011 |
| Closest metre | Iambic tetrameter |
| Characters | 525 |
| Words | 106 |
| Sentences | 5 |
| Stanzas | 4 |
| Stanza Lengths | 4, 4, 4, 4 |
| Lines Amount | 16 |
| Letters per line (avg) | 27 |
| Words per line (avg) | 7 |
| Letters per stanza (avg) | 108 |
| Words per stanza (avg) | 27 |
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Submitted on May 01, 2011
Modified on March 10, 2023
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