Analysis of Beyond Senses



Close your eyes
Hear silence
Shut your mind
Let it rush over you
Let if flood you

Drown in it
Die in it
Fight throught it

Open your eyes
Listen, listen, listen
Reawaken your mind
Become it
Wear it

Let if fill you
Let it control you
But fight it

Temptation
Weakness
Fear

Let them overpower you
Let them win
If you don't fight
If you close your eyes
If you're deaf
If your thoughts freeze
Your become their slave


Scheme AXBCC DDD AEBDD CCD EXX CXXAXXX
Poetic Form
Metre 111 110 111 111101 1111 101 101 111 1011 101010 01011 011 11 1111 11011 111 010 10 1 110101 111 1111 11111 111 1111 10111
Closest metre Iambic dimeter
Characters 385
Words 80
Sentences 1
Stanzas 6
Stanza Lengths 5, 3, 5, 3, 3, 7
Lines Amount 26
Letters per line (avg) 13
Words per line (avg) 3
Letters per stanza (avg) 55
Words per stanza (avg) 13
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Submitted on October 05, 2012

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Jillian Veitenheimer

My writing is a way for things to flow out of me that I didn't even know was within me. By sharing it with all the other poets out there I can rebuild my strength in myself. I can free my soul and let it soar in the stars. Let the wind rip me free of the being that carries my emotions. Poetry is my heart beat. more…

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