Analysis of Bitter And Bruised



I'm sick
Sick of waking up
Every morning
Feeling like
sh*t

I'm sick
Sick of drinking
Cheap *ss beer
That tastes like vinegar
And p*ss

I'm sick
Sick of living in this
Filthy, rat infested
Apartment that constantly
Reeks of sh*t

I'm sick
Sick of listening
To all the b*llsh*t
That comes out of your
Lips

I'm sick
Sick of stitching
Up all these wounds
Cause it hurts like a
b*tch

I'm sick
Sick of acting like I care
Nowadays
I just sit and stare
Out the window
All day long
Cause I just don't
Give a sh*t


Scheme Axbxc Abxxd Adxcc Abcxd Abdxx Aedexxxc
Poetic Form
Metre 11 11101 10010 101 11 11 1110 111 111100 011 11 111001 101010 0101100 1111 11 11100 110111 11111 1 11 1110 1111 11110 11 11 1110111 10 11101 1010 111 1111 1011
Closest metre Iambic dimeter
Characters 469
Words 98
Sentences 1
Stanzas 6
Stanza Lengths 5, 5, 5, 5, 5, 8
Lines Amount 33
Letters per line (avg) 12
Words per line (avg) 3
Letters per stanza (avg) 65
Words per stanza (avg) 16
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Submitted on September 07, 2015

Modified on March 05, 2023

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