Analysis of Butterflies Instead



If only we could flutter,
that would be perfection.

To fly so freely,
would it be simple enough for you?

It's the complications you fear.
They hide themselves from me, I would solve them yet.

I would tremble -
up, up, upwards.

I do not ask you for fifty years.
Three simple days would suffice, as long as that was my end.

I would treasure such a simple time.


Scheme XX XX XX XX XX X
Poetic Form
Metre 1101110 111010 11110 111100111 1001011 11011111111 1110 1110 111111101 11011011111111 111010101
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 348
Words 69
Sentences 8
Stanzas 6
Stanza Lengths 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 1
Lines Amount 11
Letters per line (avg) 25
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 46
Words per stanza (avg) 12
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Submitted on May 02, 2011

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Kirsty Hunter

Kirsty Hunter resides in Dundee, Scotland. She spends her days writing and being pestered by her needy cat Sheba, as she waits for her first year of university (where she’ll be studying English) to begin. Ambitions in life: to become a celebrated writer, and own a llama as a pet. Influences include Sylvia Plath, Simon Armitage and Margaret Atwood. She enjoys running, eating chocolate torte and drawing faces on eggs. more…

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