Analysis of Call of The Ocean



I began to run towards the waves of an ocean
 But white sands prevented me from running -
I fell on the sands, couldn't reach the water line.

Only my feet got wet with my own blood
 Streaming from the wounds
 Caused by the broken seashells
On which my bare feet stepped hard.

Leaving behind the ocean of my illusion
 I came back to the real world-
 The world of struggle and love
 The world of punishments and rewards.

The waves from the illusive ocean-
Called me back, but I did not listen.
It is still calling me in my dream
I know, one day I'll have to listen
To go.


Scheme AXX XXXX AXXX AAXAX
Poetic Form
Metre 1011101011110 1110101110 111011010101 1011111111 10101 110101 1111111 100101011010 1111011 0111001 011100001 011001010 111111110 111101011 111111110 11
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 557
Words 111
Sentences 5
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 3, 4, 4, 5
Lines Amount 16
Letters per line (avg) 28
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 110
Words per stanza (avg) 28
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Submitted on April 21, 2015

Modified on April 06, 2023

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