Analysis of Crossroads



the choice is simple, yet complex
to join the flow or back to the beginning
the knife of thoughts, my mind dissects
I have but minutes, it's almost final inning

so many roads of picks ahead
so many doors that closed behind
i threat myself to start the tread
of something seemingly benign

a plethora of things, around, in flight
from black to white,
with lots of whats and whys
and ways and weighs
the yeses and the nays

I can go back, abaft the beam
a lead to navigate the dream
that woke me up so early for so long
or should I tell that dream: "so long?!"
or I can stay and buoy with tide
diurnally, the lows the highs
and trust my masters
to choose the height
of my yet undetermined flight

the cons, the pros and I suppose
you too relate to poor decision making

I known for certain, when it's done
my sight will leap - direction forward
for now...however, having fun
with sea- against the shore-ward

it's very near,
it's close enough to touch
it's scalpel's sharp before incision
I only hope to know this much
I want to make the right decision


Scheme XAXA BXBX CCDEE FFGGXDXCC XA HXHX XIHIH
Poetic Form
Metre 01110110 11011110010 01111101 11110111010 11011101 11011101 1111101 11010001 0100110101 1111 111001 0101 010001 1111101 0111001 1111110111 11111111 111101011 01000101 01110 1101 1110101 01010101 11011101010 11110111 111101010 11101 1101011 1101 110111 11101010 11011111 111101010
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 1,013
Words 201
Sentences 3
Stanzas 7
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 5, 9, 2, 4, 5
Lines Amount 33
Letters per line (avg) 25
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 117
Words per stanza (avg) 28
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Submitted on May 01, 2011

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Didar Baizhanov

Somewhere between my birth in the land-locked nation of Kazakhstan and becoming U.S. Merchant Marine officer - poetry became something of a satellite in my travels through life ;) ____________________ My most sincere Thank You! for the feedback! ____________________ Here are some poems that I liked (here on Lulu), please give appropriate authors your comments if you get a chance:- October Hearts by PoetryofJune - High(Coup) by JayS (haiku) - Tranquility by Beccanine - Nemesis by Timothy Francis Savage - My Bright Place by Zenocyde - I Fought in a War by Justin R Esplin (haiku) - Love Blooms by Dee Edgett - A Haiku: Violin Music by Clara B. Ray - Cigarettes by faustus - Implode by Elise Hadden - Haiku: Violet Roses by PoetryofJune - The Friend I Didn't Want - Ryan Wong :) - Plus Infinity by Neli Fatu de Valahia - Never Good; Never Bad by Graham Geiger - Two Snowflakes by Kiran - With a grey sky by Spirals - Pine Needles by Matthew Lerette - Bound Again by Danny Warren Patterson - Lie-F by RomanoJohnson - A Child's Memory of a War by Change - A Cold November Day by Bonchance - El espejo roto (The Broken Mirror) by Taqua-------------------------------- more…

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