Analysis of Cruel fate
Because now I'm stuck
Beneath the paws of a cruel tiger
O father wish me dare
O mother wish me heaven…….Landy sunny
I was never alone
Where that golden time had gone
I was under your refuge
I dared for everything and you never refused
Oh, dad, you were so kind
I troubled you a lot yet you did not mind
Always took in lap and smiled
How can I forget when memories rewind?
Today I am down and surrounded
By vultures and rounded
I miss your shelter and protection
I needed you now for all such action
Apart form all, I miss you both dearly
I go no where with intention clearly
I love and cry with all those your affection
Now wish I could reflect the reaction!
Why did you go away so early?
I needed you most when was not ready
I am down with all odds at this age
How to write it even on blank page
My eyes are wet when see you on wall
I put a word in the form of call
You both smile and give me little hint
I take it as blessings and think
How dearly you looked after me
I am grown up today and tally free
Yet those memories rush and make me feel sad
Mom you are missed a lot and so is the dad
Give me one more chance to be your lovely child
I want to feel warmth and nature so mild
I shall never feel such kindness and gesture
I know there lays cruel fate and future
Scheme | XAXB XXXX CCDC EEFF BBFF BBGG HHXX BBII DDAA |
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Poetic Form | Quatrain (56%) |
Metre | 01111 0101101010 110111 11011101010 111001 1110111 1110110 11110011001 111011 11010111111 110101 11101110010 011110010 110010 111100010 1101111110 0111111110 1111101010 11011111010 1111010010 111101110 1101111110 111111111 111110111 111111111 110100111 111011101 11111001 11011101 1111010101 11100101111 11110101101 11111111101 1111101011 11101110010 1111101010 |
Closest metre | Iambic pentameter |
Characters | 1,249 |
Words | 266 |
Sentences | 5 |
Stanzas | 9 |
Stanza Lengths | 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4 |
Lines Amount | 36 |
Letters per line (avg) | 28 |
Words per line (avg) | 7 |
Letters per stanza (avg) | 110 |
Words per stanza (avg) | 29 |
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Submitted on March 29, 2013
Modified on March 05, 2023
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