Analysis of Cruel fate




 Because now I'm stuck
 Beneath the paws of a cruel tiger
 O father wish me dare
 O mother wish me heaven…….Landy sunny

I was never alone
Where that golden time had gone
I was under your refuge
I dared for everything and you never refused

Oh, dad, you were so kind
I troubled you a lot yet you did not mind
Always took in lap and smiled
How can I forget when memories rewind?

Today I am down and surrounded
By vultures and rounded
I miss your shelter and protection
I needed you now for all such action

Apart form all, I miss you both dearly
I go no where with intention clearly
I love and cry with all those your affection
Now wish I could reflect the reaction!

Why did you go away so early?
I needed you most when was not ready
I am down with all odds at this age
How to write it even on blank page

My eyes are wet when see you on wall
I put a word in the form of call
You both smile and give me little hint
I take it as blessings and think

How dearly you looked after me
I am grown up today and tally free
Yet those memories rush and make me feel sad
Mom you are missed a lot and so is the dad

Give me one more chance to be your lovely child
I want to feel warmth and nature so mild
I shall never feel such kindness and gesture
I know there lays cruel fate and future


Scheme XAXB XXXX CCDC EEFF BBFF BBGG HHXX BBII DDAA
Poetic Form Quatrain  (56%)
Metre 01111 0101101010 110111 11011101010 111001 1110111 1110110 11110011001 111011 11010111111 110101 11101110010 011110010 110010 111100010 1101111110 0111111110 1111101010 11011111010 1111010010 111101110 1101111110 111111111 111110111 111111111 110100111 111011101 11111001 11011101 1111010101 11100101111 11110101101 11111111101 1111101011 11101110010 1111101010
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 1,249
Words 266
Sentences 5
Stanzas 9
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 36
Letters per line (avg) 28
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 110
Words per stanza (avg) 29
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Submitted on March 29, 2013

Modified on March 05, 2023

1:20 min read
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Hasmukh Mehta

am an ex-serviceman from Indian Air force. I joined Oriental Insurance Company and retired from there too in May, 2007. I have been graduated from Punjab University. I hold technical qualification like Diploma in Radio/engineering .I have done English and Hindi stenography as well. I had mastered the art in Morse telephony too. I am associated with several welfare organizations and served long time as Union leader too. I am at present working as hobby writer. I write poems on various subjects and invite suggestions from all the quarters. I have written one memoir named “As I see it” and ready for publication. One interesting part of writing I would love to share with all my reader friends. I am not sure weather it may be the same case with all as I do not want to be caught in any controversy. When I sit on my personal computer, there is absolutely no thought in mind as to what is to be picked up as thought and written. These all things I leave it to the discretion of almighty to fill my mind with relevant ideas. So far I have been graced by Him and as result able to compose about 4000 poems. I have be awarded with 4 achievement award from the www.ezinearticles.com for successfully meeting with their standard. I am writing on many sites so as to be associated with reader friends all over the world. I am thankful to all those who have supported me in my initial days. more…

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