Analysis of Desires of Love



I want him to be able to read me
Know everything about me
And still find me amazing
I want him to feel my touch
Argue with me and disagree
And still love me much
I want to explore the foundations of the earth with him
I want only me, in which he'll be inside
I want him to die for me
I want him to breathe my last breath
I want him to fear death
Knowing that without me
It's worse than dying
I want him to not be intimidated by my life
To not fear anything coming his way
And if he is afraid, to have courage
Give me hope, and say "no matter what WE will be okay"
Maybe the situation may fall astray
Security in my love will push me another day


Scheme AABCACDEAFFABGHIHHH
Poetic Form
Metre 1111110111 110011 0111010 1111111 10110001 01111 11101001010111 11101011101 1111111 11111111 111111 101011 11110 1111110100111 111101011 0111011110 1110111011111 1000101101 01000111110101
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 626
Words 136
Sentences 1
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 19
Lines Amount 19
Letters per line (avg) 26
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 502
Words per stanza (avg) 136
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Submitted on August 28, 2013

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Lanelle Taylor

My name is Lanelle Taylor , I love to write. Usually because I'm a peacemaker outside of writing and do not express myself much especially if I think that it wouldn't make the situation any better, so I would write to escape. I apologize if my poetry is long, repetitive, or doesn't make any sense what so ever. It's more emotional than factual. ♥ Thank you for taking time out of your life to read and criticize. I try my best to say thank you to all the comments. Love all you poets out there, keep up the good work.Live . Love . Laugh . more…

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