Analysis of Destiny



I squared my shoulders and walked forward to meet my fate, with my destiny solidly at my side. I needed to know that he would always be at my side pushing me forways encouraging me on and never letting me say no. I wanted to know that I could trust him with my heart, he'd never let me down.

But what is love without mistakes? What's faith if you never get your heart broken? How are you going to know he's Mr. Right if he doesn't catch you when you fall. Your other half is out there waiting for you to find him. Time flys by but you won't know it yet, you got to take chances, make mistakes.

The days seem to have more in it with you promiseing me the world. Five minutes without you seems like an eternity. You seem to be my world and without you there is nothing left. It doesn't matter how hard I try, I can never get you of my mind. He grabbed ahold of my heart and held on tight, and on the crash down he tole me I was beautiful. He said he'd protect me up until his last dieing breath.


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Words 201
Sentences 15
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Submitted on May 01, 2011

Modified on March 05, 2023

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kaila

i love to write poetry like all the time or whenever i can and i love to read books ecspecially ones by my favorite authors... i see poetry a way to get my expression out without being destrutive or just simply breaking down crying. I've been through a lot of stuff in my life and i worry about mi future and i like to express and tell mi story to tell people mi life story to a certain extent of course.... so yeah but we're going through a lot right now and i'm really worried about how were even going to get out next meal so idk so if you could help us please do... more…

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