Analysis of Dreams with you
Dreams with You
Do you ever let your mind wander
In places faraway
Have thoughts that give you pleasure
and make you want to stay
Lately I find myself going to this peaceful solitude,
Where you and I are together and no one can intrude.
We walk along the beaches and make love in warm white sand.
We share each others dreams and desires and hold each others hand.
We know what the other is feeling just by the glance of a touch.
We have never felt so safe and wanted anyone as much.
So if you want to take a break from life's daily pains and schemes.
Just let your mind go wandering and meet me in my dreams.
Copyright Derrick Ling
| Scheme | X AB AB C C D D E E F F X |
|---|---|
| Poetic Form | |
| Metre | 111 111011110 010101 1111110 011111 1011110111010 11011010011101 11010100110111 1111010010011101 1110101101101101 11101110101011 111111011110101 11111100011011 10101 |
| Closest metre | Iambic hexameter |
| Characters | 618 |
| Words | 123 |
| Sentences | 8 |
| Stanzas | 12 |
| Stanza Lengths | 1, 2, 2, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1 |
| Lines Amount | 14 |
| Letters per line (avg) | 36 |
| Words per line (avg) | 9 |
| Letters per stanza (avg) | 42 |
| Words per stanza (avg) | 10 |
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Submitted on December 14, 2009
Modified on March 05, 2023
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