Analysis of Drifting Slowly



Questions, silly answers,
To the pain that's been haunting me.
Yet failing is believing,
That the pain inside is killing see?
The answer to my question,
Lies with the vision, but can it be?

Can you hear me now?
am I drifting from reality?
I can feel this now.
What's become my fantasy?
Do you fear me now?
Or is it just my misery?
I am here…… just drifting slowly

The light I see before me,
So bright, yet still forming.
The vision in your eyes is clear,
Like a shadow in its dawning.
Just hope you understand,
That fear is only flaunting.


Scheme XABAXA CACACAA ABXBXB
Poetic Form
Metre 101010 10111101 1101010 101011101 0101110 110101111 11111 1110110 11111 1011100 11111 11111100 11111010 0111011 111110 01001111 1010110 11101 1111010
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 525
Words 103
Sentences 12
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 6, 7, 6
Lines Amount 19
Letters per line (avg) 22
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 137
Words per stanza (avg) 34
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Modified on March 05, 2023

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Geni Kelepouris

I began writing when i was 16. I enjoy expressing myself through all forms of art ( my profile pic is one of my art pieces). I have had a life full of tragedies and suffer post traumatic stress. I find that art and writing soothes my soul and allows me to heal from all the pain that has been haunting me. I have an obsession with existence and love nothing more than to discuss all the different theories of why we are here. My poems cover a range of topics from love and inspiration to complete random mania. There are also some very deep poems that i needed to write to get the sorrow from my life. I just hope whoever is reading them enjoys them. more…

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