Analysis of Drizzle So Long



We walked hot sand alone,
We returned from Eden and closed it's gates...

I knew all too soon what you were about,
I saw every blade of earthly delights,
Savaged and plunging the uncertain seas,
Knowing love abhors a vacuum,
And that love thieves on your perfumed trail...

What passes for satin sheets and silks,
Becomes bedevilled upon borrowed money,
And the backbone of joy,
So true and free from the twilight,
Races and rolls out of the cleft...


Scheme XX XXXXX XXXXX
Poetic Form
Metre 111101 1011100111 1111111001 11100111001 1001000101 10101010 011111011 110110101 01101110 00111 1101101 10011101
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 437
Words 79
Sentences 3
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 2, 5, 5
Lines Amount 12
Letters per line (avg) 29
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 117
Words per stanza (avg) 26
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Submitted on September 25, 2015

Modified on March 05, 2023

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