Analysis of Enraptured Moment



In the rapture of his eyes my desire flames
He holds me in the crook of his heart
And adds desire to the flame
As I watch it jump higher
I spin out of control I make myself a liar
Leaving the the truth untold
Becasue reason came and I turned it away
To see the story unfold
And as I lay in his arms
I see everything that could be
But could the price I have to pay
Be too much to let me stay?
So many questions left unanswered
But the truth I still turn away
My body screams within rapture
A lonely tear leaves my eye
Live for today my heart cries
For tommorrow we might die
And still you don't understand
But with tommorrow comes Truth It's Light.


Scheme ABCDDEFEGHFFIFDJKJLM
Poetic Form Etheree  (35%)
Metre 001011110101 111001111 01010101 1111110 111101111010 1000101 1101011101 1101001 0111011 1110111 11011111 1111111 11010110 10111101 11010110 0101111 1101111 11111 011101 1111111
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 628
Words 132
Sentences 2
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 20
Lines Amount 20
Letters per line (avg) 26
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 512
Words per stanza (avg) 132
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Submitted on February 08, 2013

Modified on March 05, 2023

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