Analysis of Expanded Horizon



The horizon, my ancestors say,

is an eye. When it shuts

its lashes sift the sea for rafts

and turn fishermen and divers to stone,

their hands still clenched around pearls,

their blood turning crystalline and cold.

The gods were in love with the horizon.

They hung their jewels

on the night-sky and ebbed into the eye

while my people stared

at the orphaned trinkets.

The priestesses rummaged

through their rucksacks.

They rubbed twigs and killed goats.

They chanted and chanted

until their voices felled the trees.

The gods have vanished.

The storms and smog have snatched

their jewels from the sky.

When the skies cleared, we saw a sun

not even ours.

The horizon is a lover of light.

Look: The galleons came and went

and none were turned to stone.

Ours is a history of consequences.

He who fails to look back.

And what is there to look forward to?

What is left but light? He who runs fast.

When the galleons came, no one ran.

We bartered our tongues

for something to chew on,

our hands for a fistful of sand.

The priestesses rummaged through their rucksacks.

What is left but light? A stray grain of rice,

the hard shell of a crab, a leaf.


Scheme A B X C X X D X E X B X A X X X X X E D X X X C X X X X X X X X A X X
Poetic Form Tetractys  (26%)
Metre 00101101 111111 11010111 0110001011 1111011 11101001 0100110010 11110 10110100101 11101 101010 0110 111 111011 110010 01110101 01110 010111 110101 10111101 11010 0010101011 10100101 010111 10101001100 111111 011111101 111111111 101001111 110101 110111 101101011 0110111 1111101111 01110101
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 1,109
Words 210
Sentences 25
Stanzas 35
Stanza Lengths 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1
Lines Amount 35
Letters per line (avg) 26
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 26
Words per stanza (avg) 6
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Submitted on May 01, 2011

Modified on March 05, 2023

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