Analysis of Flicker



The candle light flickers on the walls,

flickering around me, burning low,

lower with every passing thought,

burning, I know.

A poets soul, dimming with the flame,

yearning to burn out, as the candle,

yes the candle; slowly releases itself,

perfectly placed on the dusty mantel.

The flame has long since burned, replacing,

and forgetting the heart of the fireplace,

forgetting the ashes; the settling dust,

that now covers the cold, hard case.

Such a loss, time losing its meaning,

meaning of poetry, a writers expression,

a passionate understanding,

gets me dreaming.

Dreaming of the words, so many words,

beautiful and romantically said,

the thoughts and dreams; desire,

others never read.


Scheme X A X A X B X B C D X D C X C C X E X E
Poetic Form Tetractys  (20%)
Metre 010110101 100011101 101100101 1011 010110101 101111010 10101001001 1001101010 011111010 0010011010 01001001001 11100111 101110110 101100010010 0100010 1110 101011101 1000010001 0101010 10101
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 691
Words 111
Sentences 5
Stanzas 20
Stanza Lengths 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1
Lines Amount 20
Letters per line (avg) 27
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 27
Words per stanza (avg) 6
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Submitted on August 09, 2016

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Gail Thomas

As a 45 year old woman who has lived through love, loss and extreme happiness poetry is the best way for me to express my emotions. I have been able to document every significant moment in my life through poetry. more…

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