Analysis of Forgive me Lord



I wake up with anger and
mad and sad.I'm sorry lord
for not do right.Evil got
in my mind I will not let
evil put me down know more.
I'm stand in the need
for help.I'm going to get
save angin and have a new
heart new mind.Walk better
with the lord on my side.
Forgive me lord for my worry.
I'm going to walk better know matter
what peolpe say about me lord.
Forgive me John.
I want to be a new person in the
lord eye not peolpe eyes.
Forgive me lord I'm strat out
new for myself.
I got to live the good life for i can
see the lord face to face.When he call me home.


Scheme ABCDEFDGHIJHBKLMNOPQ
Poetic Form Etheree  (40%)
Metre 1111100 101101 11111 0111111 1011111 11001 111011 110101 11110 101111 01111110 1101110110 1110111 0111 1111011000 11111 0111111 111 1111011111 1011111111
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 545
Words 125
Sentences 13
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 20
Lines Amount 20
Letters per line (avg) 21
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 427
Words per stanza (avg) 120
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Submitted on January 15, 2010

Modified on March 05, 2023

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