Analysis of I Always See My Star



My heart you took beneath the moon
as our lips first kissed,
Now if we are not together
your heart is sorely missed.

May I name a star for you
I'll look when I'm alone,
Only if you name one too
that you may call your own.

I must choose the brightest one
I'll know then you're with me,
If you choose the closest star
It means with me you'll be.

Even with so many stars
in the sky above,
When I see a star above
I know I'm with my love.

Bobby Ferguson 19/08/2014.


Scheme XAXA BCBC DEXE XFFF D
Poetic Form
Metre 11110101 110111 11111010 111101 1110111 111101 1011111 111111 1110101 111111 1110101 111111 1011101 00101 1110101 111111 10100
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 445
Words 95
Sentences 6
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 1
Lines Amount 17
Letters per line (avg) 21
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 70
Words per stanza (avg) 19
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Submitted on December 01, 2014

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Bobby Ferguson

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