Analysis of I love my friends



I love my friends
 Wish I could stay up to an end
 Who knows what and when will they be of some use?
 But certainly friendship can endure and never confuse

It has delicate angle
 From all the ways, it looks triangle
 Whether in happiness or in troubles
 It enriches bond with no struggle

What a way to feel when one runs into rough weather!
 Another friend rushes on the spot for help to render
 Such is the closeness and feeling for each other
 As if meant for each other, to live together and offer

I offer no rose flowers
 But understand them as goof follower
 Never offer bitter words so as to offend
 But stay fully aligned with readiness to defend

I blink in spare time
 All old friends come before screen sometimes
 What were they in those childhood days?
 Completely innocent with nice behavior always

I emotionally move in that memory stream
 They come one by one like sun beam
 Enlighten me with their warmth and memory
 I cry sometimes with emotions and feel sorry

Many are gone and some are at far distance
 I rarely find any occasion to visit by chance
 But I love them at heart and miss no moment
 To remember them and pass the comment


Scheme XAXX BBXB CCCC XCAA XXDD EEFF XXXX
Poetic Form Quatrain  (29%)
Metre 1111 11111111 11101111111 11001010101001 1110010 11011110 1001001010 101011110 1011111101110 01011010111110 110100101110 111111011010010 1101110 101111100 101010111101 1110011100101 11011 111101101 1010111 010100110101 101001011001 11111111 01011110100 110110100110 10110111110 11011001011011 11111101110 1010101010
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 1,128
Words 212
Sentences 4
Stanzas 7
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 28
Letters per line (avg) 33
Words per line (avg) 8
Letters per stanza (avg) 130
Words per stanza (avg) 30
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Submitted on March 18, 2013

Modified on March 07, 2023

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Hasmukh Mehta

am an ex-serviceman from Indian Air force. I joined Oriental Insurance Company and retired from there too in May, 2007. I have been graduated from Punjab University. I hold technical qualification like Diploma in Radio/engineering .I have done English and Hindi stenography as well. I had mastered the art in Morse telephony too. I am associated with several welfare organizations and served long time as Union leader too. I am at present working as hobby writer. I write poems on various subjects and invite suggestions from all the quarters. I have written one memoir named “As I see it” and ready for publication. One interesting part of writing I would love to share with all my reader friends. I am not sure weather it may be the same case with all as I do not want to be caught in any controversy. When I sit on my personal computer, there is absolutely no thought in mind as to what is to be picked up as thought and written. These all things I leave it to the discretion of almighty to fill my mind with relevant ideas. So far I have been graced by Him and as result able to compose about 4000 poems. I have be awarded with 4 achievement award from the www.ezinearticles.com for successfully meeting with their standard. I am writing on many sites so as to be associated with reader friends all over the world. I am thankful to all those who have supported me in my initial days. more…

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