Analysis of If wishes were horses

Sunil Bhatia 1971 (Allahabad)



If wishes were horses,
Then magical carpets would fly.

Castles in the air
Would become the favorite
Play ground for pixies and elves
Amidst shooting stars
With moonlit rides
On broomsticks across
Candyfloss skies
And fairies singing on twinkling butterflies.

There would be joy
And laughter all around
With only wonder for everyone
With happy faces
To keep our souls alive.

Wishes were horses..


Scheme AX XXXXXXBB XXXAX A
Poetic Form
Metre 110010 11001011 10001 1010100 111101 01101 111 1101 11 01010110010 1111 010101 11010110 11010 1110101 10010
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 388
Words 66
Sentences 5
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 2, 8, 5, 1
Lines Amount 16
Letters per line (avg) 20
Words per line (avg) 4
Letters per stanza (avg) 81
Words per stanza (avg) 16
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Submitted by Suniil_Bhatia on August 25, 2014

Modified on April 05, 2023

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