Analysis of Inside A Poem



I'll bring you flowers in the pouring rain,
dance across your smiles as I grin,
pin romance to your hair,
we can dine on beauty's cool sin,
this madness called love I can not contain,
you're a vision so fair.

Dare I dream
of our hearts wrapped
in passion's colourful light?

Might I please you with some fragrant champagne
as this desire bursts from within?
Spin me into your lair,
I'll rest my hands upon my chin
and bathe in delight's delicate terrain,
will you please take me there?

Where supreme
emotions; rapt,
turn the day into the night.

Bite my lips and caress my tongue's wisdom,
freedom's ours to place inside a poem.


Scheme ABCBAC DEF ABCBAC DEF GG
Poetic Form Etheree  (35%)
Tetractys  (20%)
Metre 1111000101 10111111 101111 1111111 1101111101 101011 111 11011 0111 1111111001 110101101 110111 11110111 010110001 111111 101 0101 1010101 1110011110 10101101010
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 607
Words 114
Sentences 7
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 6, 3, 6, 3, 2
Lines Amount 20
Letters per line (avg) 24
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 98
Words per stanza (avg) 23
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Submitted on January 05, 2011

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Ian Sawicki

Ian Sawicki has been writing poetry for over twenty years. He is a Manchester born poet, who has dedicated his life to exploration and composition of poetry. His work reflects the many great influential experiences of his life, the pain, the pleasure combined to create new exciting poetry. If anyone is interested in my books then please visit my lulu storefront. All artwork on these books is by my own hand. http://stores.lulu.com/chasingtheday more…

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