Analysis of It's Crazy!!!



Actions speaks louder than words,
saying one thing only to do the other.
My patience is running thin,
because it seems like there is no place in your heart where i fit in.
So my motivation has changed, not trying to be your man but trying to find a replacement,
because i refuse to go another minute until u find where in your life i play a factor in it.

Crazy part is, that your so easy to be persuaded,
thinking that this material world can provided you your medicine.
I'm not without fault, I've succumbed to the ideals of the media,
but i don't let it become reality and believe the hype that its coming from.

Crazy part is, an uneducated man with no goals or aspirations easily receives the key to your heart
but the good has to sit and figure out what keys to pick apart to get a start.
Someone once told me, a thug can comfort me and make sure I'm safe better than a regular dude,
thinking stupid like a good man can't protect you!
So i say,  that's coo, when i make it, I'll make sure the girl i choose ain't you.
But yet they're the first mad when they see me successful with someone outside my race,
speaking crazy again like "why the heck she wit him",
having the audacity to state me as a statistic saying "these women always taking all our good men".

Crazy part is they aren't close minded to recognize the meaning of a true man and what we have to give.
Oh, so I'm the sellout, I'm a hypocrite, I'm the dumb one who can't find a women in my own race,
NO, I'm the one who got tired of waiting for you to see my potential and state my place,
I'm the one who found someone who appreciates my generous gifts and wanted to be treated as a queen and i they're king,
I'm the one who finally opened there eyes on what the world had to offer,
I'm the one who decided to live with less regret and more fun,
I'm the one you lost out on.
Maybe it was your own idealistic hypocrisy that kept you from realizing your worth,
or maybe it was the ease of finding sex which made it hard to find love.
Crazy part is, I'm still the one you missed out on.


Scheme XABBXX XCXX DDXEEFXX XFFXACGXXG
Poetic Form
Metre 1011011 10111011010 1101101 0111111110111110 11010111101111110110010 011011101010011110111101001 10111111011010 101101001101011100 11011101100110100 1111101100010111101 101110100111110101000101111 10111101011111011101 11110111010111110101001 101010111011 111111111111011111 1110111111010111111 1010011101111 1000100111100101011011011011 10111101101100101011011111 11101101010111110100111 11011110110111110100111 10111110101100101011101010111 1011100101111011110 101110111101011 1011111 10111100100100111110011 110110111011111111 101111011111
Characters 2,021
Words 403
Sentences 13
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 6, 4, 8, 10
Lines Amount 28
Letters per line (avg) 56
Words per line (avg) 14
Letters per stanza (avg) 395
Words per stanza (avg) 101
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Submitted on May 21, 2017

Modified on March 05, 2023

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