Analysis of Just waiting
I am trying
To spread myself
Into the depth of time
Since my journey
I am trying
To listen the foot steps
Of Divine
Since my awakening
But surprisingly
My body is moving with
Deserted thoughts
To work out the mathematics
Of life I have
Papers in my hands are blank
Gathering courage
To write something worth
Full of voids in its ink
Peculiar graphs I am following
Dry hours are resisting me
From talking to sky
Making friendship with birds
But I am not worrying
Not submitting myself
I know struggle makes
The life beautiful
Just waiting
For the lovely permission
Of God to get His flute call
The melodies of life
=========================== 16.10.13 Wednesday
Scheme | AbxcAxxacxxxxxxxxacxxabxxaxxx c |
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Poetic Form | Etheree (33%) Tetractys (23%) |
Metre | 1110 111 010111 1110 1110 110011 101 110100 10100 1101101 0101 1110010 1111 1001111 10010 11101 111011 010111100 11010101 11011 101011 1111100 10101 11101 01100 110 1010010 1111111 010011 10 |
Closest metre | Iambic trimeter |
Characters | 632 |
Words | 118 |
Sentences | 3 |
Stanzas | 2 |
Stanza Lengths | 29, 1 |
Lines Amount | 30 |
Letters per line (avg) | 17 |
Words per line (avg) | 4 |
Letters per stanza (avg) | 258 |
Words per stanza (avg) | 59 |
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Submitted on October 27, 2013
Modified on March 05, 2023
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