Analysis of Metamorphic Smiles



Competitive activity explodes
the intellect while realms of notions shift,
colours swirl ability as twisted
sanity splashes puddles of pursuit -
there's a toned look blinking athletic eyes;
distinguished perception dances blue scenes.
Manipulative behaviour stretches
psychology as games quickly begin.
Opposition strikes imagination,
she reels from the force of imagery,
manifestations of perplexity
wail ghost stories around delicate strength,
a rush of specifics counteracts pain,
love twists the assault in new directions,
it flitters away on the tail of sound.

A synchronous operation stutters
as injections of personality
clash inside cold dimensions of purpose,
thirty two pieces break twenty fingers
as fast metamorphic smiles twist hawk's heads
into feathers of victory; white wisps
of peaceful songs which float the dove's warm heart.
It's over in an instantaneous
moment of hard-faced numbers and symbols,
a mathematical spiral of her
femininity blows a kiss to him,
and he stumbles away, a vicious blur.


Scheme AXXXXXXXXBBXXXX CBDCXAXDXEXE
Poetic Form
Metre 0100010001 010111101 110100110 1001010101 1011100101 0100101011 0100110 0100111001 01010010 111011100 001010100 1110011001 01101011 1100101010 110110111 0101010 101010100 1011010110 1011011010 110101111 0110110011 1101110111 110010100 1011110010 001001010 010010111 0110010101
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 989
Words 152
Sentences 5
Stanzas 2
Stanza Lengths 15, 12
Lines Amount 27
Letters per line (avg) 31
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 421
Words per stanza (avg) 76
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Submitted on June 04, 2010

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Ian Sawicki

Ian Sawicki has been writing poetry for over twenty years. He is a Manchester born poet, who has dedicated his life to exploration and composition of poetry. His work reflects the many great influential experiences of his life, the pain, the pleasure combined to create new exciting poetry. If anyone is interested in my books then please visit my lulu storefront. All artwork on these books is by my own hand. http://stores.lulu.com/chasingtheday more…

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