Analysis of Missing You



Listening to songs of birds choir
Breaching into my soul
Feeling your presence while plays our song

My mind winds to cluster
Love beyond the stars
I can't help but fluster

Pressing lips withon my sin
Accepting moral defeat
I pronounce my heart of tin

Remember all your emotion
Lost beyond oblivion
Fine sapphire of all your devotion
Enough to burn snow

Now feeling shallow glee
Never lost without you
While entangled in this sea

I outburst in rainbows
Upon this simple note


Scheme AXX AXA BXB CCCX DXD XX
Poetic Form
Metre 100111110 100111 1011011101 111110 10101 111110 101111 0101001 1011111 01011010 1010100 1100111010 01111 110101 101011 1010011 1101 011101
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 456
Words 83
Sentences 1
Stanzas 6
Stanza Lengths 3, 3, 3, 4, 3, 2
Lines Amount 18
Letters per line (avg) 22
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 65
Words per stanza (avg) 14
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Submitted on October 15, 2013

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Erwin Jung

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