Analysis of My Eyes



When you are in learning,
have you wondered, should be learning?
Hard to admit?  Its not anger, its never pain....
We suffer for our hope. Hope in the everlasting....
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When i was in learned i have wondered, i have dreamed.
I saw color, and vivid images of mankind.
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I saw a people, separated. unseen, of the unimagined.
I was looking, at what i had seen.
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I could not imagine the dwelling sorrow. of imaged anguish. and pain..
What were they was selling?
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They published in vain, to ease stop the pain.
but the sycamore tree had grew no more.
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To bear this burden, of hopeless, and anguish, and pain...


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Poetic Form
Metre 111010 11101110 110111101101 1101101100010 1 111011110111 1110010100111 1 110101000110010 111011111 1 11101001010111001 101110 1 1100111101 101011111 1 1111011001001
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 854
Words 114
Sentences 17
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 18
Lines Amount 18
Letters per line (avg) 40
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 719
Words per stanza (avg) 115
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Submitted on May 07, 2017

Modified on March 05, 2023

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louie B

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