Analysis of My fear of loosing you
Do not blame me in this chariot of light
Taking me on a journey
The ride is more interesting
As you decorated me with fresh lilies
Heaven is here in my parted life
Billowing me into air like a whirl smoke
As every moment is loving
And peacefulness clad my dream of oness
Take me by the hand like i walk with,
my mother.
I know the tempt that shadows your content
But i am in shaking of loosing my stand
Let our conscience be our mediator
Hence you remember my punishment
I voluntarily sacrificed for your comfort
The intruders come after your heart but negligence
Pretend not and glance through your listed rules
That bind the soul of this union
As your awareness bring me laughter
At zero point of breaking out of understanding
I am just trying my best to hook you in my promise
Then pay off my blame
To decide my right and wrong
If found guilty of breaking my heart...,and my fear,
lingers on............
Scheme | XXAB XXAB XCXX CXXX XXCA XXXXX |
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Poetic Form | |
Metre | 11110110011 1011010 0111100 1110011110 101101101 10010111011 110010110 010011111 111011111 110 110111110 11101011011 11010110100 110101100 10100101110 0010110111100 0110111101 11011110 110101110 110111011010 11110111110110 11111 111101 11101101111 101 |
Closest metre | Iambic pentameter |
Characters | 882 |
Words | 170 |
Sentences | 3 |
Stanzas | 6 |
Stanza Lengths | 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 5 |
Lines Amount | 25 |
Letters per line (avg) | 29 |
Words per line (avg) | 7 |
Letters per stanza (avg) | 120 |
Words per stanza (avg) | 28 |
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