Analysis of My release
I hold my breath in shaking hands
and cast it to the sky,
in hope the stars would understand
and listen to my cry.
I hold my thoughts unto the wind
to take within its fist,
to see the conflict of my mind
entangle with the mist.
I write my voice upon a page
to read it with my eyes,
and hear the hidden liquid rage
within the ink that dries.
I catch the ocean in my heart
its waves beat in my veins,
as water from the deep depart
and through my fingers drains.
I shed my tears into the night
with silver soul and morn,
I loose my sorrow when I write
and smile upon the dawn.
Scheme | XAXA BCBC DEDE FGFG HXHX |
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Poetic Form | Quatrain (80%) Etheree (30%) Tetractys (20%) |
Metre | 11110101 011101 0101101 010111 11111001 110111 11010111 010101 11110101 111111 01010101 010111 11010011 111011 11010101 011101 11110101 110101 11110111 010101 |
Closest metre | Iambic tetrameter |
Characters | 554 |
Words | 119 |
Sentences | 6 |
Stanzas | 5 |
Stanza Lengths | 4, 4, 4, 4, 4 |
Lines Amount | 20 |
Letters per line (avg) | 22 |
Words per line (avg) | 6 |
Letters per stanza (avg) | 89 |
Words per stanza (avg) | 24 |
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Submitted on May 01, 2011
Modified on March 05, 2023
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