Analysis of My Story
Hoping for brights of a better tomorrow
Sulken, sunk, O kissing the brow of clouds
Trapped in my heart, lies a man of sorrow
Whom speaks vibrant of angels toungue
Each and every day till the last breath
Even then he breaths within my tears
For he sleeps an angel, not of death
And as the stars will continue to shape,
Singing of purity, though surpassing heaven
They mend a childs weeping heart
Of the innocense that pleads the age of seven...
4/7/13 ~ Erwin Jung
| Scheme | ABACDEDFGHGC |
|---|---|
| Poetic Form | |
| Metre | 1011101001 111100111 1011101110 11101101 1010011011 101110111 111110111 0101101011 101100101010 1101101 1011101110 11 |
| Closest metre | Iambic pentameter |
| Characters | 458 |
| Words | 88 |
| Sentences | 2 |
| Stanzas | 1 |
| Stanza Lengths | 12 |
| Lines Amount | 12 |
| Letters per line (avg) | 31 |
| Words per line (avg) | 7 |
| Letters per stanza (avg) | 366 |
| Words per stanza (avg) | 86 |
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Submitted on October 15, 2013
Modified on March 05, 2023
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