Analysis of My Words Thou Rise



My Words Thou Rise

O, My words!
Thou be beauty's never ending flow
That never fades and that never dies
Ever immortal and lively as the heaven above
Thou be the warm hope
Of some radiant morn
In some wintry abode far away
Where the darkness pours itself brimful.

My words, thou be the misty tunes
Of some veiled mysteries
That prevails everywhere
Since the beginning of time.

Thou be the strong bricks
Over whose magical stairs
May our journey towards
The eternal truth begin.

My words thy rise high,
Very higher than this weaker existence of mine,
Very high thou soar
Flapping strong wings of yours
You fly fearlessly
To those beautiful realms
Which I have never thought or imagined.

Unlike my life
You fly beyond the barriers
The barriers the time and death
And you keep on flying
You keep on rising
Higher and higher
Higher and higher……


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Poetic Form
Metre 1111 111 11110101 110101101 10010010101001 11011 111001 011001101 10101011 11110101 111100 10110 1001011 11011 1011001 1101001 0010101 11111 1010111001011 10111 101111 111 111001 1111011010 0111 11010100 01000101 011110 11110 10010 10010
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 813
Words 150
Sentences 6
Stanzas 6
Stanza Lengths 1, 8, 4, 4, 7, 7
Lines Amount 31
Letters per line (avg) 22
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 113
Words per stanza (avg) 25
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Submitted on February 05, 2017

Modified on March 05, 2023

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