Analysis of Neelam
Neelam 69 inch your sister screams wanting
and not wanting the pleasure-preached-priest
pricks of the pleasure-prince!
Deep in the night while the nightingales in
the nights knee-deep-knight
Neelam 71 inch I`m stable,I`m still;she takes
me in,pulling me in her love endless
perpetual lips---
Setting me in motion,unstoppable beats
Nelam,Nelam why she rejects;yet she recoils
in happiness as the Phenix rises;flapping his
immortal wings `neath her soft,sweet,sylvan
chaste,satin skin
Nela,Nela please go tell your sis my Mosque
is void,Church is empty,Pagoda lay lifeless
still;Temple shed tears of the lovelorn tulip
Seeing her thus adamant,unfeeling--
Wallowing in her own well of wistfull thinkin
Arti,what happened?Have you discovered the
other side of my Sin?!
| Scheme | ABCDEFGHIJKDDLGMADND |
|---|---|
| Poetic Form | Tetractys (25%) |
| Metre | 11110110 011001011 110101 10011010 01111 111111 11100110 01001 101011 1111101 0100101011 0101101 11 11111111 1111110 11110110 10011 10000111110 1110100 101111 |
| Closest metre | Iambic pentameter |
| Characters | 745 |
| Words | 128 |
| Sentences | 3 |
| Stanzas | 1 |
| Stanza Lengths | 20 |
| Lines Amount | 20 |
| Letters per line (avg) | 31 |
| Words per line (avg) | 6 |
| Letters per stanza (avg) | 624 |
| Words per stanza (avg) | 111 |
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Submitted on June 12, 2010
Modified on March 05, 2023
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