Analysis of Only One I'm Hurting



Only One I'm Hurting
I sit here alone and feeling blue;
Because I know you don't love me like I love you.
My heart aches and longs for what should be.
And the only one I'm hurting is me.

Some say that I should just move along.
When it comes to you, I'm not that strong.
From your love I don't want to be set free.
And the only one I'm hurting is me.

The landscape has us so far apart.
But there is no distance in my heart.
I choose to be held by your mercy,
And the only one I'm hurting is me.

I've spent years chasing whiskey down;
It helped to turn a smile from a frown.
From troubles it never made me free,
But the only one I'm hurting is me.

In my mind I pretend it isn't so,
My heart just can't seem to let you go.
To others I'm blind and cannot see,
But the only one I'm hurting is me.

I sit here lost in this world of mine,
Trying to present that I am fine.
Perhaps I'm trapped in misery,
But the only one I'm hurting is me.


Scheme xaabB ccbB ddbB eebB ffbB ggbB
Poetic Form Tetractys  (20%)
Metre 101110 111010101 011111111111 111011111 0010111011 111111101 111111111 1111111111 0010111011 01111101 111110011 111111110 0010111011 11110101 111101101 110110111 1010111011 0111011101 111111111 110110101 1010111011 111101111 101101111 01110100 1010111011
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 907
Words 196
Sentences 16
Stanzas 6
Stanza Lengths 5, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 25
Letters per line (avg) 28
Words per line (avg) 8
Letters per stanza (avg) 116
Words per stanza (avg) 33
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Submitted on August 24, 2016

Modified on March 05, 2023

1:03 min read
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Gary Ferris

Please visit my page on facebook: Poetry by Gary R. Ferris Jr.I have published 9 books which are titled: "The Sabbath Day-The Forgotten Gift", "Beyond Grace", "Above All", "Dark Shadow", "Storms of the Heart", "The Eyes Journey", "From the Inside Out", "Hand In Hand". and "Crawling Toward Heaven". more…

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