Analysis of Paralysis



This is paralysis.
Am I loud and clear?

Repetition, repetition
Save me; this is
Relief one inch at a time.

But all this is temporary.
Treading water and
Barely afloat.

Should I
Drop everything and
Collapse into
Anesthesia?

Don't hide.
Resist.

My eyes may be
Sewn shut,
But I can still
See the clouds.


Scheme XX XXX ABX XBXX XX AXXX
Poetic Form
Metre 110100 11101 010010 1111 0111101 1111100 10100 1001 11 1100 0101 010 11 01 1111 11 1111 101
Closest metre Iambic dimeter
Characters 283
Words 54
Sentences 9
Stanzas 6
Stanza Lengths 2, 3, 3, 4, 2, 4
Lines Amount 18
Letters per line (avg) 13
Words per line (avg) 3
Letters per stanza (avg) 39
Words per stanza (avg) 9
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Submitted on May 01, 2011

Modified on March 05, 2023

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eric khong.

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