Analysis of profile
as you look at my profile,
what do you see.
do you see the light in me.
or do you see peace in me.
or do you see jesus walking in me.
can you see my pain 'that drive me in sain.
and some times' takes over me.
do you the smile' on my face, is it of grace .
or is it because 'i'm hideing my shaime.
do i look like i'm a young man,in your eyes of 33
if i told you ,i'm realy 48 would you believe me.
i see so much of life .
and death .some time it push me over the line.
i lelt the toush of gods hand
and i still live in his land.
yes, some times it hard to go on.
day by day.
but i get up.
just like you.
and go on his mighty way.
but sometimes i want to give up.
and go home to be with my lord and savior,and king.
but i stop and think.
is it for me to say.
i stop in look in your eyes that look back at me
with that smile of happieness that you give me.
and this is what i see .
my wife ,my children who still love me.
you keep me going on with my life.
this life it's for me.
i still ask god' why do i try.
and he show's me
you
Scheme | ABBBBCBDEFBGHIIJKLMKLNOKBBBBGBPBM |
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Poetic Form | |
Metre | 111111 1111 1110101 1111101 1111101001 1111111101 0111101 11011111111 111011111 11111011111 11111111011 111111 01111111001 1101111 0111011 11111111 111 1111 111 0111101 10111111 01111111011 11101 111111 110101111111 111111111 011111 111101111 111101111 11111 11111111 0111 1 |
Closest metre | Iambic tetrameter |
Characters | 996 |
Words | 236 |
Sentences | 29 |
Stanzas | 1 |
Stanza Lengths | 33 |
Lines Amount | 33 |
Letters per line (avg) | 23 |
Words per line (avg) | 7 |
Letters per stanza (avg) | 747 |
Words per stanza (avg) | 237 |
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Submitted on August 26, 2014
Modified on March 05, 2023
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