Analysis of Remiss



Would I be so sure my fears are real.

Like a just-missed meal as my anxiety strives to steal
My serenity.

And I know who the thieves are: They are self, pride, fear and there
Is a space between when the anxiety begins and the medicine kicks in

Where I pray 'God relieve me of the bondage of self and my defects of character and any other self-serving sin.

For I fear the unknown and then comes the knowledge, what to expect, that is the defect and I just needed to learn how to wait and let God begin His everloving care and it has always been.

I love you, God.


Scheme A AX XB B B X
Poetic Form
Metre 111111111 10111110100111 10100 01110111111101 10101100100010010010 111101110101101101100010101101 11100101101011011101001110111110110111101111 1111
Characters 554
Words 111
Sentences 5
Stanzas 6
Stanza Lengths 1, 2, 2, 1, 1, 1
Lines Amount 8
Letters per line (avg) 55
Words per line (avg) 14
Letters per stanza (avg) 73
Words per stanza (avg) 19
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Submitted on August 03, 2015

Modified on March 05, 2023

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