Analysis of Roses and Violets, Part II



If roses were red,
And violets were blue,
If they really were both,
Truly this hue,

Then you’d understand,
You’d see me right through,
You’d know in an instance,
How I felt about you,

I’d never have questioned,
If this really were true,
I’d never rewrite,
This poem all anew,

I’d never regret,
That day I met you.
And wouldn’t be forced,
To bid you adieu,

If roses really were red,
This dream, I’d never construe,
And if violets really were blue,
Love would have not, a need to renew,

No, roses aren’t red,
Nor violets a blue,
For love you I did,
If only… if only you knew.


Scheme ABXB XBXB XBXB XBXB ABBB ABXB
Poetic Form Quatrain  (83%)
Metre 11001 010001 111001 1011 1101 11111 110110 111011 110110 111001 11001 110101 11001 11111 0111 11101 1101001 1111001 011001001 111101101 110101 110001 11111 11011011
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 570
Words 109
Sentences 2
Stanzas 6
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 24
Letters per line (avg) 18
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 71
Words per stanza (avg) 18
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Submitted on May 02, 2011

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Eduard Bey

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