Analysis of Sacred Scriptures Ad#3
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Prelude: Amber is fossilized tree resin (not sap), which has been appreciated for its color and natural beauty. Typically used to retain an object, frequently insects, for extended periods of time. "Nature's Time Capsule"..
Chapter 1
A golden gemstone flickers dimly in shade
Paved the way for me to stalk-
Walk & talk my way through to your heart
Part of me wanted to move on but the light still shone
Lone wolves even find a pack for support & love
Above that, nothing pretty much
Such is the life of the introvert with lovestruck vertigo
Hurt to go away from you, & it took a while
Smiles displayed happiness so I kept my distance
Dissonance would spray if my sinful selfishness got to me
A lot of me had packed these emotions--
Oceans, with trenches deep
Seeping lost treasures of glory we once held
Smelled ripe till' the trails fell stale
Pale gemstones with latent power
Devouring time, so let's make up for it by the hour
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Time is devoured, so let's make up for it by the hour
We're pale gemstones with latent power
Old trails were ripe, till they turned stale when we smelled
But seeping lost treasures of glory were what we held
Irreversible trenches deep, locked away in oceans
Wide bodies of water in our minds -- called emotions
My sinful selfishness got to me, a lot of me sprayed dissonance
Could I ruin your smiles of happiness? I couldn't so, I kept my distance
It all took a while & it really hurt to go
Such is the life of the introvert stuck with lovestruck vertigo
Nothing else lasts, pretty much, that is above
Even lone wolves like us need a pack of support & love
With a light like a beacon that still shone for me, it never part
I wouldn't be lost in the blind dark with ignition of spark
So, I journeyed down the road to your heart
The art of how I'd walk & talk,
Stalk the same roads we once paved
The golden gemstone gave brightness that stayed
In the end,
It was still there flickering dimly in the shade
Chapter 2
Memory banks grant thanks to her mind,
She's harnessed the ability of time's feel
Captured photos in capsules that bind,
& camera lens that rewind movies of past
Reels of yesterday display scenes that heal
Amber can't find what's real when nothing seems to last
Define erosion to divine steel,
When God's hand & her clock clash
Designed fate is set to reveal
When life's hourglass sits in seal
Images of defined future never seem to pass
Chapter 3
Amber is the watchmaker,
Calenders flow so volcanic
Will the blueprints of misery
Miss this mechanic?
She's trudging in isolation,
Fasting the plight of panic
Dark times rise as the moon lights,
Reflecting her becoming manic
Chapter 4
Like the intricate details,
On a slumbering snails' shells
You'll spin in splendid circles,
Before time's hard lesson tells,
Of your existences enigmatic worth,
And your end's chief eternity
The last of your breathe is birth,
When your problems cease in fraternity
By: ©William J.D Jr (Copyright) January 24, 2014
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Poetic Form | |
Metre | 011101001110101 1110101101100111111010101100111110111011100101 11011011011111010011100100101001101110100110101001110110 10 0101101001 1011111 11111111 1111011110111 11101011011 01110101 110110101110 11101111101 101100111110 100111110100111 0111111010 101101 10110110111 1110111 1111010 010011111111010 1 1 1 1 1 1 1 1 110101111111010 11111010 11011111111 1101101100111 0100101101010 11011001011010 11010011101111100 1110111100110111110 11101110111 1101101011110 10111011101 1011111011011 1011010111111101 110110011101011 1110101111 0111111 1011111 010111011 001 111110010001 10 100111101 11000100111 10101011 10011101011 111001111 101111110111 010101011 111011 01111101 1110101 1001011010111 10 10101 111010 1011100 11010 1100010 1001110 1111011 010001010 10 1010001 1010011 1101010 0111101 1110101 01110100 0111111 1110100100 1101110100 |
Closest metre | Iambic pentameter |
Characters | 3,249 |
Words | 588 |
Sentences | 15 |
Stanzas | 9 |
Stanza Lengths | 2, 1, 17, 8, 20, 12, 9, 9, 1 |
Lines Amount | 79 |
Letters per line (avg) | 32 |
Words per line (avg) | 7 |
Letters per stanza (avg) | 283 |
Words per stanza (avg) | 65 |
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