Analysis of Sahara's Love Letter to The Moon (Revised)



Oh Moon, come slumber on my chest of sand dune
Let your moonlight drizzles engulf this land in June
Sing! So the sandstorm dances with your flowing tune
Oh Lunar beam! Your touch wreaks fame and fortune
Cross the skies and stay with me, for it makes me immune

O Moon! Only if you agree for an honeymoon
I would be...
Draped in the enthralling Blue Bells in the noon !
Sinking in the sparkling sea of heart-gold doubloon !
Invincible and untouchable even for the worst simoon !
Spellbound by your Love in the form of a monsoon !
Glided with streams linking from the Glenrock Lagoon !
Clothed with eat-able sand sweeter than macaroon !

Oh, lunate Moon! Unveil your beauty !
Don't leave me in anxiety !
Quench my thirst with your creativity !
Accept me and I'll serve you with my loyalty


Scheme AAAXA ABAAAAAA BBBB
Poetic Form
Metre 11110111111 1111011101 11011011101 11011111010 1010111111101 111011011110 111 100111001 10001011111 010000100101011 11110011001 10111010101 1111011011 11101110 11100100 111110100 011011111100
Closest metre Iambic hexameter
Characters 768
Words 137
Sentences 15
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 5, 8, 4
Lines Amount 17
Letters per line (avg) 36
Words per line (avg) 9
Letters per stanza (avg) 205
Words per stanza (avg) 49
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Submitted on April 17, 2011

Modified on March 31, 2023

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