Analysis of Sandstone Etchings

Kathy A. Wittman 1949 (Tennessee)



I try to discern your obscure messages
as I marvel at your sturdy cliff dwellings,
sandstone etchings of your primeval world;
you wandered as hunters and gatherers,
coming to rest in your new earthly home,
called Mesa Verde, a solid tableland amidst
mystical, chaotic chasms of time and space.

I try to imagine your primordial lifestyles
plowing soil beneath your feet, scattering
the seeds of hopes, dreams, and aspirations
while you steadfastly prayed to your gods;
at the apex of your ancient civilization,
known to us now as your classical period,
you created useful, aesthetic cultural tools.

I try to envision you gazing heavenward,
with childlike wonder,
as you paused just for a moment
to contemplate eternal truths,
catching a glimpse of rare earthly beauty;
yet you did descend from celestial heights,
scattering your ashes into the vicissitudes
of time and space, and your own oblivion.


Scheme XXAXXXX XXXXBXX AXXXXXXB
Poetic Form
Metre 11101101100 11101110110 110110101 1101100100 1011011101 11010010101 10001011101 111010101001 1010111100 011110010 11101111 10111100010 111111100100 1010100101001 1110101101 1110 11111010 1100101 1001111010 1110110101 1001100100100 11010110100
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 876
Words 146
Sentences 3
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 7, 7, 8
Lines Amount 22
Letters per line (avg) 33
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 243
Words per stanza (avg) 49
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Kathy A. Wittman

I am a retired college teacher. In the past, I taught classes in Education, English, and Psychology. At present, I am focused on developing my potential as an artist and writer. I have self-published books in the genres of autobiography, fiction, and poetry. I have a Bachelor's Degree in English from the University of Tennessee (1972), a Master's Degree in Educational Psychology from the University of Tennessee (1983), and a Doctoral Degree in Educational Foundations from the University of Wyoming (1988). I have taken numerous college classes in Art and Creative Writing over the past decade. I completed an Associate Degree in Art from the Laramie County Community College (Cheyenne, Wyoming) in 2018, and I completed a Bachelor's Degree in Art from the University of Wyoming (Laramie, Wyoming) in 2020. I consider myself to be a "Life-long Learner". more…

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