Analysis of Season's Greeting



Most Christmas cards are a bore. This thing, I fear, is one more
Fling at a message so trite that dullness would seem like delight.
But back to the subject anon…What came a clear midnight upon?
Dasher and Dancer and others, angelic hosts round virgin mothers.

If God is love, I sing his praise. For Christmas we’ll vote Him a raise,
As well as dominion on earth, and offer congrats on the birth:
Jesus the Son and the Savior, sent to redeem our behavior,
Delivered midst horses and kine, Mother and Son doing fine.

He shall be known as Emmanuel. Let’s celebrate! We’ll have an annual
Affair and a holiday season. Who needs to fret for a reason?
Rush out, buy presents galore. Almost home, just a few more,
Got all the neighbors and kin. Next year we’ll do it again.

Must go to church once or twice. Dress-up clothes, don’t they look nice?
Sit straight and worship our Lord, look solemn though we feel bored,
Try not to wiggle and cough. Then we can take a year off.
Better to give than receive. Pass the plate, then we can leave.

Head for the next office party, stop first and look at the arty
Light shows and lawn decorations, before heading off for libations.
But now we must hustle and scurry, get to the party and hurry
Drinks down, forget inhibitions, make several drunk propositions.

New sorts of all kinds of fun, new ways to honor God’s Son.
Won’t He be pleased with our class? Christmas is really a gas!
From “Jesus Asleep in the Hay” to what we have made it today,
Our Christmas is certainly cool compared to that old-fashioned Yule.

But I beg for a moment of silence, for the spirit to which we’ve done violence.
For Christmas, whatever’s done to it, though our rituals seem to pooh-pooh it,
Is come down as a beautiful story, full of wonder and splendor and glory.
No matter the ways we pervert it, our efforts can’t ever subvert it:

For as you seek, so shall you find, that Christmas is a state of mind,
And all its meaning, all we ken, is “Peace on earth, good will toward men”.
For man, although he’s not a god and, mortal, will return to sod,
Is nonetheless a precious thing. Unto him let our anthems ring!

So in our hearts we consecrate the spirit we seek, the human state
Of grace and power, peace and love, the wings that bear us high above
Life’s lowly plain, our purpose pure, that come what may, we shall endure.
May joy be lord and pain but fleeting…my wish for you, this season’s greeting.


Scheme AXXB XXXX XCAD XXXX EBEX CXXX XFEF XDXG XXXG
Poetic Form Quatrain  (22%)
Metre 11011011111111 110101111011101 11100111101101 1001001010111010 1111111111011101 111010110101101 10010010110110010 010110011001101 111110100110111100 0100101011111010 1111001111011 11010011111101 11111111111111 110101011101111 11110011111011 10111011011111 1101101011011010 11010100110111 11111001011010010 11010101101010 11111111111011 111111011011001 1100100111111101 10101100101111101 111101011010101111100 110111111010011111 11110100101110010010 1100111011010110011 1111111111010111 01110111111111011 111110101010111 1010101101110101 10101110010110101 1101010101111101 11011010111111101 111101110111111010
Closest metre Iambic octameter
Characters 2,416
Words 447
Sentences 32
Stanzas 9
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 36
Letters per line (avg) 52
Words per line (avg) 12
Letters per stanza (avg) 207
Words per stanza (avg) 50
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Submitted on May 01, 2011

Modified on March 05, 2023

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