Analysis of Simple Pleasures



On your knee, in the lamplight
dipping buttered toast in your coffee,
I hear the hush of the silent house.
The other children gone off to school,
you and I sit together
alone in the dim morning light
full of love and trust
chattering to one another about
simple times with unfurrowed brows.
We were so close then.
I hold that memory in my mind
like an old black and white photograph
one would carry in a wallet worn soft
from years of riding in a back pocket
a photo
showing the ones you love
the most beautiful mother
the best loved and dearest held
the treasured one--
to be shown far from home.


Scheme ABCDEAAAFGAHAAAIEAJK
Poetic Form Etheree  (35%)
Metre 111001 101010110 110110101 010101111 1011010 01001101 11101 1001101001 101111 10111 111100011 11110110 1110001011 1111000110 01 100111 0110010 0110101 0101 111111
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 578
Words 114
Sentences 4
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 20
Lines Amount 20
Letters per line (avg) 24
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 475
Words per stanza (avg) 114
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Submitted on May 01, 2011

Modified on March 05, 2023

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