Analysis of So lonely.



I get so lonely when you're not around.
I hate the chains, by which you are bound.

You run yourself ragged everyday.
My heart aches for you, especially today.

The fact that you don't even get just one day.
In which you could just choose to sit or play.

It's not fair that she treats you this way.
And worse yet, that she thinks it's okay.

You've given them your everything, your heart and soul.
She should bow down and kiss your feet, not leave a giant hole.

How can she not see what she does to you?
I feel so guilty for what she puts you through!

The hardest thing for me to see.
Is that you're just as lonely without me!!!!


Scheme AA BB BB BB CC DD EE
Poetic Form Couplet 
Metre 1111011101 110111111 110110101 1111101001 01111101111 0111111111 111111111 01111111 11011101101 11110111110101 1111111111 11110111111 01011111 1111110011
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 613
Words 123
Sentences 15
Stanzas 7
Stanza Lengths 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2
Lines Amount 14
Letters per line (avg) 34
Words per line (avg) 9
Letters per stanza (avg) 68
Words per stanza (avg) 18
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Modified on March 05, 2023

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